The Apartment

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But this is not really worth the time to download or run through the too short story. The ending was a cheap attempt to do what has been done many times before. For the dev’s: nice try, but your app request has bad timing and ruins your climactic end, completely, for the goal of the app. It might need to be moved to the beginning of the app at first-run where the requests normally happen. This will allow your story to run smother and you can insert something else there or the same thing. The audio is also too loud and harsh on the ear. I had to drop it down which also ruined the experience. Make it longer. This felt like I was reading scripting in the voice of that YouTube narrator that does the dumb voice that is supposed to be creepy but just annoys you and makes you want to mute and read the subtitles. I just wanted to rush through what I was reading due to how slow it progressed. I do like the design work you did on Megan’s eyes. That was something kinda creepy and cool and I thought that was going to play in as part of the story. The story and app would have been better if you had somewhere further to go with it.